July 28th, 2010
Raindrops is what we are
once together, assembled as one sea
collected in the spiritual heaven's clouds
descended to this world, we fell down individually
the winds of life scattered us here and there
we met with strangers along the way
once together, assembled as one sea
collected in the spiritual heaven's clouds
descended to this world, we fell down individually
the winds of life scattered us here and there
we met with strangers along the way
joining with friends and colliding with enemies
it would seem nature paired us up with these
the hard surfaces we crashed upon
were the circumstances that made us drift apart
and decided the type of water we would be
and so, we collected into new puddles of pedigrees
were the circumstances that made us drift apart
and decided the type of water we would be
and so, we collected into new puddles of pedigrees
no choice in where we fell, we formed our societies
friendships of sweet spring water and gangs of toxic basins
the sweet and salty waters do not mix
so be it, to each his own community
traveling the paths of least resistance
we will eventually meet with that same sea
and be gone as the individuals we thought we were
returning back to the substance of what we are essentially
but remember that we are raindrops
we will be summoned back to the heavens again
and join together becoming that harmonious body
the cycle continues endlessly
but this time reunited, friends and foes alike
neither sweet nor toxic but as simple, plain water
and when we are called to rain again
that is when we will truly reign free.
traveling the paths of least resistance
we will eventually meet with that same sea
and be gone as the individuals we thought we were
returning back to the substance of what we are essentially
but remember that we are raindrops
we will be summoned back to the heavens again
and join together becoming that harmonious body
the cycle continues endlessly
but this time reunited, friends and foes alike
neither sweet nor toxic but as simple, plain water
and when we are called to rain again
that is when we will truly reign free.
12 comments:
WOW, I never thought of them that way!!! DEEP!!!! Cool...
qatra qatra roota hai asmaan kuch ayse.....
kya meri perchayan bhi dhoondti hai farq
mausam ki wafa meh.....
Badalon Ke Darmian Kuchh aisi Sazish Hui
Mera Mitti Ka Ghar Tha Wahan Hi Barish Hui
Falak Ko aadat Thi Jahan Bijlian Girane Ki
Hum Ko Bhi Zid Thi Wahan Ashiana Banane Ki
wah wah wah wah
@bardmayj@o - thank you for the nice comments! :)
@Chrisji - wah wah bhai kya zaberdast shair apne share kiya! Apne khud ye likha? Seriously very nice
You like it? I am Glad. Well jaan khuda ko daini hai so i'll be honest it's not ALL mine. actually the beginning 3 lines are and the rest is something I really liked from a friends web. It fit nicely so I placed it here.I never forget to mention what an awesome poet wrote this a really awesome poet....
Ok ..mera hogaya: ab it's your turn: bring it on: seriously.... finish this line no jokes neither nor crazy or funny endings;)...a thoughtful and feelful.... sentence
roothe reh gaye hum... ansoon bhi rook gaye sanum
per rookti nahi wafa meri....shyad yehi hai mera gum
________...__________
jao kahin tum ...jaye kahin tumhara gum....
tumneh hi wafa nah ki... toh kaise kehte hum...
keh hum tumhare hi the sanum.... Cool I like this is this a game??? if it is can you tell me the name please....
@chrisji - yaar to be honest urdu is not my strong point. I can barely speak it without sounding like an uloo LOL. (partially kidding) but lemme try...
.."per rookti nahi wafa meri....shayad yehi hai mera gum
DIL KI AAG BUJTI NAHIN...INN AANSOON KE KATRE SE
AB DIL NE JISM KO JILADIYA...KUBSE BUND HO GAYE AANSOON"
...lol i tried :/ on second thought I like Dodi's reply! :)
Dodi... I have not named it yet .... so y not now... any Ideas both of you...
this is what we did so far
jao kahin tum ...
jaye kahin tumhara gum....
tumneh hi wafa nah ki...
toh kaise kehte hum...
keh hum tumhare hi the sanum....
roothe reh gaye hum...
ansoon bhi rook gaye sanum
per rookti nahi wafa meri....
shyad yehi hai mera gum
DIL KI AAG BUJTI NAHIN...
INN AANSOON KE KATRE SE
AB DIL NE JISM KO JILADIYA...
KUBSE BUND HO GAYE AANSOON
...next part.i'll begin.howz this
heran khudse sochte hai hum her waqt..
yeh hume kya hogaya...
ab poochte hai khudse...
kyun khuda se khudki dua meh...
teri hi khushi mangte hain hum...
ik fakat kerde jo khuda humpeh ik ehsaan...
dede mudje tera her ki ansoon or ghum..
badle meh dede tudjhe meri muskurahtoon ke mausaam...
your turn guys..
_________...._____________
__________..._____________
__________..._____________
funny:Shaadi ke pehle -takdir hai magar kismat nahi khulti tajmahal banana chahata hoon lekin mumtaz nahi milti
Shaadi ke baad - takdir hai magar kismat nahi khulti tajmahal banana chahata hoon lekin mumtaz nahi marti
part of our poem: by the way waht are we naming it
mudjese yeh umeed na rakho keh tumhari wafa ko kissi our ka naam doon meh...kyun keh
Chandni chand se hoti hai, sitaron se nahi
Mohabaat ek se hoti hai, hazaron se nahi"
lol Dodi, nice one!
Chrisji, yaar I'm resigning from this urdu poem..you guys plz finish it
ruhudeen ali, kya howa urdu khatumb howi? hahaha lol jks aprt come on yaar ur good so keep going!
ok....
Dodi,
how about this
names:
meri khoofnak muhobaat.... haahahah
Ramadan Kareem to all howz it goin' so far........ sorry guys had to leave u know aftariz and all.... no time....
Chrisji...
Ahahaha very funny........
not bad title....... ok... so waht abt ur lines know that its 1 on 1 let the battle begin
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